There will be a scripted sound bridge. The lead female character will be having an sound flashback of an event that has already happened therefore initiating the non-linear narrative. This is the first draft.
Lead female will be sitting on a bench looking down sadly at a photo reminiscing
Girl: Mum, I'm going away.
Mother: What?
Girl: I'm leaving mum. I'm leaving with Lewis.
Mother: Tone raised What? Pause You can't leave. What am I going to do without you. I need your support. You think this is just some stupid little crush? Well let me tell you it isn't ok?
Girl: I don't believe you. It's not like you and dad were//
Mother: //Don't you DEAR MENTION YOUR FATHER IN THIS
Girl: I'm leaving with Lewis mum, and there is nothing you can do to stop me.
Mother: Yes. I. Can. I am your mother. DON'T YOU DEAR WALK OUT THAT DOOR!
Girl: Goodbye mum.
Mother: YOU WALK OUT THAT DOOR AND YOUR NEVER WELCOME BACK.
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